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Ocean

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My feet peddled around. Fast, fast, too fast to be able to do it for long. I held my head up, screaming, screaming, crying out for someone. Anyone who would be there. ‘help me, help me. Please. Help me.’ But there was no one there and there was no air to breathe. No air to scream. No air for sound and my feet felt heavier and heavier and I got cold. My arms got stiff and the water was blurry before my eyes. How did I get here, how will I ever get away from here? Slowly my arms started to sink deeper in the water, and I could hardly see the surface. Where was I, where was I, where will I be when I’m somewhere? And I started to cry, to cry, but who would notice these big salty tears when there’s an ocean full of them? And I was alone, I was lonely. This was the most alone I’d ever been.
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Ydira's avatar
I think its very good, and that the repetion of words makes them more powerfull, but I must say that, if you would do this for and other page or so it would start to anoy me. But this is just good.